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Mr. mistery come out!

작성자 : joj***   ·   2016-04-30

There is no mistery in our class. But I'll make it up. The mistery is that I made up is called "Who cleans the floors"
When we go home the floors always dirty but when I come to school the floor is clean. And the friends who are asked to be the one to clean the floors don't clean up they play. So who clean up those messes?
I think maybe a secret caretaker who is helping our school or it is just a preinciple. Or a scary man that appears at night every day. Who knows?


This is not real. Don't panick.

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There is no mystery in our class. But I'll make it up. The mystery that I made up is called "Who cleans the floors?"

 

Every time we go home, we always leave the floor dirty but when I go back at school the floor is clean. My friends who were tasked to clean the floors played instead of cleaning. So who cleaned up those messes?

I think maybe there's a secret caretaker who is helping our school or it is just a principal or a scary man that appears every night. Who knows?

 

This is not real. Don't panic.



POINTS TO REMEMBER:
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Proper Tense of the Verb
-Spelling
-Choice of words

 

Well done Wanda! You have such a creative mind. Thank you for sharing this story. Keep smiling! :)

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