Harry was in the magic school, Hogwate and he was studying his magic medicine. But his grade in this subject gets worse and worse. So, he wanted to get rid of his magic medicine class. But when Harry woke up the next day, there was a special magic medicine book. It was Seberous Snapes book. Seberous Snapes is a Hogwate magic medicine teacher. When Harry started to study medicine with that special book his grade became very good. At that time, Harry wanted to be an honor. And his grade is good enough to achieve his dream to be an honor student in the future.

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Great job for doing your homework Kevin!