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작성자 : red*** · 2016-04-27
I went to Gyeongbokgung palace and
with my class today.
We saw a fireman musical in the Cecil Theater.
There a huh-dang men charater.
But his b-boying was so wonderful!
And there a very scary teacher and she didn't dance but she likes dance too.
It was funny!
When musical finished, we ate lunchbox for lunch.
My lunch box wa s mom made.
So somehow it was more delicious than the normal meal.
It was happy time.
Bye!
with my class today.
We saw a fireman musical in the Cecil Theater.
There a huh-dang men charater.
But his b-boying was so wonderful!
And there a very scary teacher and she didn't dance but she likes dance too.
It was funny!
When musical finished, we ate lunchbox for lunch.
My lunch box wa s mom made.
So somehow it was more delicious than the normal meal.
It was happy time.
Bye!
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I went to Gyeongbokgung palace with our class today.
We saw a musical fireman in the Cecil Theater. There was a Huh-dang man charater but his b-boying was so wonderful!
Also there was a very scary teacher. She didn't dance but she likes dancing. It was funny! When the musical finished, we ate our lunch box for lunch. My lunch box was made by my mom. So, somehow it was more delicious than the normal meal. It was a happy time. Bye!
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