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We have lots of traditions in Korea. Among them all,  there is one tradition that I want to share. It's a Korean traditional music named Gukak. It is a music that is played by instruments such as janggu, drums, gayageums and many other musical instruments. I like taepyeongso and danso because they make peaceful sounds and it reminds me of our ancestors who made these sounds and of the nature. The music that I like the most there are the song of Ariran and the beautiful country. I also love other traditions and I can't think of any country that has this tradition and I do love Korea.

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Well-written paragraph Wanda! Congratulatios!