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작성자 : red*** · 2016-04-25
Title: What is your wish?
Answer: My wish is live happy with my family
forever. And healthy too.
Because I like my family very much.
Answer: My wish is live happy with my family
forever. And healthy too.
Because I like my family very much.
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CORRECTION/S:
Answer: My wish is to live happily and healthily with my family forever, because I like them very much.
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