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My favourite holiday
작성자 : dum*** · 2016-04-25
My favourite holiday is Sunday.
Becuse A Sunday, I going to the church.
I in the church I see my freands, I playing.
And I play my family and talking to my family.
And to sunday I rideing to bike. It was funny.
And I eating an apple, an orange, and a banana.
I like Sunday.
Becuse A Sunday, I going to the church.
I in the church I see my freands, I playing.
And I play my family and talking to my family.
And to sunday I rideing to bike. It was funny.
And I eating an apple, an orange, and a banana.
I like Sunday.
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CORRECTION/S:
I see my friends, and we play together at church.
I also play and talk with my family.
I ride a bike on Sunday too. It is fun.
I also eat an apple, an orange, and a banana.
I like Sunday.
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