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A good match made in heaven

작성자 : vau***   ·   2016-04-17

An anniversary marked the day when the couples get married each other. As it is a really special day for them, they make sure that the couples will live amicably forever before the marriage. And, there are two way of their thinkinh about making a relationship with the certain partner. One is having a consort who has a smilar with one who owns the oppossite personality. Even if I am young, I usally ponder about my future life between these two options. Following my thought for long time and listenind some advices from my parents, the opinion is that the couple with opposite nature.
To begin with, the mind of soliciting gets deeper as they have to struggle each other everyday baecause of different points of view. Of course, the couples will try not to see even one another's faces after their minds are offended with the conflict.However, as the time passes, they are going to reconcile again and if that kind of event keeps happenind persistently, such matter is being acclimatized and one day, they will consider the mate's circumstance following his or her opinions somehow.
Secondly, the family progresses a lot. If there are people who have different idea, one can give help to the another not thinking of that way. They fill a hole in defects and make the perfect result by curtail the flows at most. As their figures are unlike, the couples are able to think a way which is better and better. But, two people will just follow as planned without makind up mind sincerely as the similar perspective keeps them from discovering any drawbacks.As a result, I want to claim that a clan with opposite tempers is better.
There are many reasons why I prefer spouses who hold contrary dispositions. A mathch stays longer in a great mood when the consequences are marvelous and fabulous. The cooperation and development lead to the wonderful result wwhich makes family happy. Eventhough there will be more quarrels and fights, this causes them to have a harmonious and blissful household.

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An anniversary marks the day when the couples get married with each other. As it is a really special day for them, they make sure that the couples will live amicably forever before the marriage. And, there are two ways of their thinking on how to make a relationship last with a certain partner. One is having a consort who has an opposite personality. Even if I am young, I usually ponder about my future life between these two options. Following my thoughts for long time and listening to some advices from my parents, the opinion is about a couple with the opposite nature.

                    To begin with, the mind of soliciting gets deeper as they have to struggle with each other everyday because of different points of view. Of course, the couples will try not to see even one another's faces after their minds are affected with the conflict. However, as the time passes by, they are going to reconcile again and if that kind of event keeps happenind persistently, such matter is being acclimatized and one day, they will consider the mate's circumstances following his or her opinions somehow. Secondly, the family progresses a lot. If there are people who have different ideas, one can give help to the other who is not thinking of that way. They fill the holes with defects and make the perfect result by continuous flow at most. As their figures are unlike, the couples are able to think a way which is better and better. But, two people will just follow as planned without making up their minds sincerely as the similar perspective keeps them from discovering any drawbacks. As a result, I want to claim that a clan with opposite temper is better.

                    There are many reasons why I prefer spouses who hold contrary dispositions. A match stays longer in a great mood when the consequences are marvelous and fabulous. The cooperation and development lead to the wonderful result which makes the family happy. Eventhough there will be more quarrels and fights, these cause them to have a harmonious and blissful household.

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