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작성자 : jer*** · 2016-04-12
My favorite musician is Ariana Grande.
she is good at singing,and she can play the piano.
and she composed "baby i","Bang Bang","problem"etc.
She is a pop star!!!
she is good at singing,and she can play the piano.
and she composed "baby i","Bang Bang","problem"etc.
She is a pop star!!!
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CORRECTION/S:
My favorite musician is Ariana Grande.
She is good at singing and she can play the piano.
She composed "Baby I", "Bang Bang", "Problem," etc.
She is a pop star!!!
POINT/S TO IMPROVE ON:
1. Capitalization -Each sentence starts with a capital letter.