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Grandmother's birthday
작성자 : red*** · 2016-04-10
Grandmother's birthday
Yesterday, was grandmother's birthday.
Mom's presnt was red vast.
My presnt was magnifier.
On friday, I made a letter card.
I drew and wrote.
I showed them to my mom.
Mom said,"It's pretty~"
I'm so glad about that sentence.
On saturday, I went to muscus buffet.
It was so delicious.
At dinner time, we ate duck meet.
It was so delicious too!!
It was happy day~
The end
2016/04/10
Yesterday, was grandmother's birthday.
Mom's presnt was red vast.
My presnt was magnifier.
On friday, I made a letter card.
I drew and wrote.
I showed them to my mom.
Mom said,"It's pretty~"
I'm so glad about that sentence.
On saturday, I went to muscus buffet.
It was so delicious.
At dinner time, we ate duck meet.
It was so delicious too!!
It was happy day~
The end
2016/04/10
답변
Grandmother's birthday
Yesterday was grandmother's birthday.
Mom's present was a red vest.
My present was a magnifier.
On Friday, I made a letter card.
I drew and wrote.
I showed them to my mom.
Mom said, "It's pretty~"
I was so glad about what she had said.
On Saturday, I went to Muscus buffet.
It was so delicious.
At dinner time, we ate duck meat.
It was so delicious, too!!
It was a happy day~
The end
2016/04/10
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