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What do you do when you are sick?
작성자 : 197*** · 2016-04-06
cold:I go to the hospitol and eat medicine.
Fever:I eat medicine and lie in the bed.
stomachache:I vomit and eat medicine.
headache: go to the hospitor.
motion sickness:I open the window.
Flu:I (quickly)go to hospitol.
Fever:I eat medicine and lie in the bed.
stomachache:I vomit and eat medicine.
headache: go to the hospitor.
motion sickness:I open the window.
Flu:I (quickly)go to hospitol.
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CORRECTION/S:
Fever: I take medicine and lay on the bed.
Stomachache: I vomit and take medicine.
Headache: I go to the hospital.
Motion sickness: I open the window.
Flu: I (quickly) go to the hospital.
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