CORRECTED COMPOSITION OF ANDY KIM

Seven Knigts

>> Seven Knights is the name of a game. Capitalize the names or the titles.

>> Make a sentence instead of a word or words.

>> Practice making an essay.

Andy, I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. However, practice making an essay. Let it be 3 or more sentences. Remember that everyone is special. Amaze the world with what you can do!

Supporting you,
Teacher Ace