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(home wark) harry potter and chambr of secrets
작성자 : lit*** · 2016-04-01
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(homework) Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets
I am gooing to talke abawout Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets. The charachkters is are Harry, Roan,Hermaione,Tom and more. the An interesting thing event from the book is when Harry go went to the secret chamber. And last at the end, Harry keeilled Tom and saved Gineny. I like thse story because it is faun.
Pointers:
1. Capitalize:
- all the words at the beginning of the sentence
- proper noun
- the pronoun "I"
- title of a book
2. Spell words correctly.
- Use a dictionary or on-line search engines like Google and Naver for the correct spelling of words.
3. "at the end"
- It is used to talk about the end part or last scene of a story.
CORRECTED COMPOSITION:
I am going to talk about Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets. The characters are Harry, Ron, Hermione, Tom and more. An interesting event from the book is when Harry went to the secret chamber. And at the end, Harry killed Tom and saved Ginny. I like the story because it is fun.
I am on the same shoe. Harry Potter is fun to read. Enjoy your weekend, Brian!
- Teacher Nica