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작성자 : jem***   ·   2016-03-30

there was a king who likes to controle persn.
one day, the king said 'sit down!'to his staff.
and he said blablabla.
and then he said 'get up' to his staff.
and then he said bla~bla~bla
and then he said 'go out.

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CORRECTION:

tThere was a king who likeds to controle persn people.
oOne day, the king told said 'sit down!'to his staff to sit down.
aAnd he said blablabla a lot of things.
and tThen he told them to said 'get up' to his staff.
and then hHe said bla~bla~bla more things.
and then Finally, he asked them to said 'go out.

There was king who liked to control people.
One day, the kind told his staff to sit down.
And he said a lot of things.
Then he told them to get up.
He said more things.
Finally, he asked them to go out.

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