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작성자 : lov***   ·   2016-03-24

I think we don't have to tell secrets to each other.
Because I think secrets should know by myself.

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CORRECTION/S:

I think we don't have to tell secrets to each other because I think I should keep my secrets to myself.

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* Sentence construction
* Sentence fragments

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