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Describe your favorite natural place in Korea.

작성자 : jun***   ·   2016-03-22

My favorite place is called Iksan.That is the place I was born.I love they're because the water was so clean that we can just drink it.It was so clean and beautiful.Unfortunately,there was an earthquake luckily It broke nothing.But it's still a very very very clean place.Many of the countrie come to Korea.Many people came to Korea because they want tradition and cultures.In my class half of my friend came to Korea.Specially,many of the Chinese people came to Korea.So my favorite place is Iksan and also other place too.Unfortunately Chinese pollution came to Korea.So now Korea nature became a little bad.So I will also help nature.

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My favorite place is called Iksan.That is the place where I was born. I love there because the water is so clean that we can just drink it. It is so clean and beautiful. Unfortunately, an earthquake happened. Luckily, it broke nothing. But it's still a very very very clean place. Many foreigners come to Korea because they want to know about its tradition and culture. In my class, half of my friends came to Korea especially, many of the Chinese people come to Korea. So my favorite place is Iksan and also other places too.Unfortunately Chinese pollution affected Korea.So now Korea nature became a little bad.So I will also help nature.
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