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Made a new club
작성자 : red*** · 2016-03-21
Today, I made a new club in school.
My club name is 'Total crafts'.
My club's activity is very very many.
But I like drawing a picture.
I think many girls will come.
But only boys come.
At that, lots of boys.
One boy has a great expression.
When I teached him, he not good at drawong.
But he is good now.
ONLY ONE DAY!!!!
I think he can became a teacher with me!!
Good luck for him~
Bye~^-^
My club name is 'Total crafts'.
My club's activity is very very many.
But I like drawing a picture.
I think many girls will come.
But only boys come.
At that, lots of boys.
One boy has a great expression.
When I teached him, he not good at drawong.
But he is good now.
ONLY ONE DAY!!!!
I think he can became a teacher with me!!
Good luck for him~
Bye~^-^
답변
Today, I made a new club in school.
My club name is "Total Crafts".
My club's activities are a lot.
But, I like drawing pictures.
I thought many girls would come but only boys came.
There were lots of boys. Among them, one boy had a great passion.
When I taught him, he was not good at drawing. But he became good at the same day, ONLY IN ONE DAY!!!!
I think he can become a teacher like me!!
Good luck for him~
Bye~^-^
My club name is "Total Crafts".
My club's activities are a lot.
But, I like drawing pictures.
I thought many girls would come but only boys came.
There were lots of boys. Among them, one boy had a great passion.
When I taught him, he was not good at drawing. But he became good at the same day, ONLY IN ONE DAY!!!!
I think he can become a teacher like me!!
Good luck for him~
Bye~^-^