CORRECTED ESSAY OF HAN SOL LEE

I am adventurous. And I also like to learn new things every day, so that I can use variety of programing languages. I want to use the right programing language in every program I work on. I want to be challenged by difficult things.

>> Instead of saying AND at the beginning of a sentence, add the word ALSO somewhere in the said sentence.

>> To simplify your sentence, connect your sentences with a conjuction (SO, BUT, AND).

>> SO THAT is used as a subordinate clause to show purpose or to give an explanation. It is used to show an action producing an intended result or a cause producing an effect.

>> Be familiar with the expression, VARIETY OF + a plural noun.

>> To avoid sending a different message, use the corrected sentences suggested above.


Thank you for telling me about your personality, Han Sol! We will be talking about this in our class, so feel free to ask some questions.

Ace