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작성자 : soo***   ·   2016-03-16

Recently, the earth has a lot of pollution so majority of people have to so much effort. Firstly, we have to use public transfort because most people have cars. Don't use the public transfort so there is traffic-jams and so much smoke come out. Secondly, many people waste the plastic bags but plastic bags can't be recycled so it is serious problem. However we must use the fabric bags. Finally, we should plant many tree and flowers because it respects our environment.

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Recently, the earth has a lot of pollution so majority of people have to so much effort. Firstly, we have to use public transfort because most people have cars. Don't use the public transfort so there is traffic-jams and so much smoke come out. Secondly, many people waste the plastic bags but plastic bags can't be recycled so it is serious problem. However we must use the fabric bags. Finally, we should plant many tree and flowers because it respects our environment.


Recently, the earth has a lot of pollution so majority of people have to do so much effort. Firstly, we have to use the public transport because most people have cars.  When we don't use the public transport, there will be traffic-jams and so much air pollution. Secondly, many people usethe plastic bags but they can't be recycled, so it is a serious problem. However, we must use the fabric bags. Finally, we should plant many trees and flowers because they help clean our environment.


Hello Karan ! thank you for doing your homework today. I sited all the corrections you had for this homework. Please find time ti read and keep studying. See you in our class.

-Teacher Rian

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