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작성자 : lov*** · 2016-03-11
Ihave stret hair.
And my mother have brown hair,
my brothor have black hair.
Only my fater have cerley hair.
The end
And my mother have brown hair,
my brothor have black hair.
Only my fater have cerley hair.
The end
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CORRECTION/S:
My
The end.
Hi Lloyd!
It's good that you have discovered how to submit your homework. ^_^ Thank you for finishing this. It is fun to read :)
It's good that you have discovered how to submit your homework. ^_^ Thank you for finishing this. It is fun to read :)Anyway, here are some points to improve on (We will talk about this in class:
* Sentence construction
* Spelling
* Subject - Verb Agreement
-T. Cherish