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작성자 : hyu*** · 2016-03-13
Im 10 year old.
Im elementary school student.
Im am in 3grad.
my teacher name is parkinwha.
parkinwha teacher is good,cleen,and pretty.
and I have friendly friand.
she name is zion.
so I like zion.
I like school vary moth.^^~~
Im elementary school student.
Im am in 3grad.
my teacher name is parkinwha.
parkinwha teacher is good,cleen,and pretty.
and I have friendly friand.
she name is zion.
so I like zion.
I like school vary moth.^^~~
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CORRECTION/S:
My teacher name is Park Inwha.
Teacher Park Inwha is good, clean, and pretty.
I have a friendly friend. Her name is Zion. I like her.
I like going to school very much.^^~
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