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작성자 : snf*** · 2016-03-11
I think the hardest job is a chef. Because cooking takes a lot of time
and there's a lot of people. And cooking could be dangeres,too.
And the easyest job is a fashion desiner. Because it could be fun
and I want to be a fashion desiner when I grow up.
and there's a lot of people. And cooking could be dangeres,too.
And the easyest job is a fashion desiner. Because it could be fun
and I want to be a fashion desiner when I grow up.
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I think the hardest job is a chef because cooking takes a lot of time
and especially when there are a lot of people. Moreover, cooking could be dangerous, too. While the easiest job is a fashion designer because it could be fun and I want to be a fashion designer when I grow up.
Thank you for doing your homework, Shinyeong! Please take note of my corrections above.
Be careful with the following:
* CAPITALIZATION
* SPELLING
(x) dangeres ~> dangerous
(x) easyest > easiest
(x) desiner > designer