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작성자 : HYU***   ·   2016-03-10

I have a 4 family.
1 of them is a mom.
my mom can shoping for the food.
and she can make delicious food.
and I eat delicious food.
and she vary love me.
so I vary vary vary vary vary vary love my mom.
2 of them is a dad.
bout my dad is vary bad.
so I like it.
3 of them is a sister.
my sister is bad.
bout playing with her so are nice.~!!
and 4 of them is me
I think I,m am smort.~~^^!!

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CORRECTION/S:

I have a 4 member family. First
 is my mom. She shops for food, she can also make delicious food that I eat. She loves me very much. So I love her very much too. Next is my dad, but my dad is very bad. So I like it. Next is my sister.
She is bad but playing with her is so nice! The last one is me. I think I am smart!

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