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작성자 : lov***   ·   2016-03-10

<Which Do You Prefer Pizza Or Hamburger? Why?>
I prefer pizza. Becase pizza has a many kind of it. And I can coose frut pizza.

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<Which Do You Prefer Pizza Or Hamburger? Why?>

I prefer pizza because it has a many different flavors, I can even choose fruit pizza.

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