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작성자 : ted***   ·   2016-03-09

Korean eat seaweed soup because it is good to paid there body so they eat seaweed soup so they eat seaweed soup to do memorize.

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Koreans eat seaweed soup because it is good for the body. Seaweed soup also helps us have good memory.

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