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작성자 : kse*** · 2016-03-05
Write about my family
They're four in the family. Mother. father. sister. and me. My father's name is Kim Sang Hyun. And he is an officer. My mother's name is Kim Seon Mi. And she is a housewife. My sister's name is Kim Yeoung Eun. And she's first grade of high school. And I am 11 years ago. I am 4th grade of elementry school. And My name is Kim Sue Eun
They're four in the family. Mother. father. sister. and me. My father's name is Kim Sang Hyun. And he is an officer. My mother's name is Kim Seon Mi. And she is a housewife. My sister's name is Kim Yeoung Eun. And she's first grade of high school. And I am 11 years ago. I am 4th grade of elementry school. And My name is Kim Sue Eun
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My Family
They're four members in my family, my mother, my father, my sister and me. My father's name is Kim Sang Hyun and he is an officer. My mother's name is Kim Seon Mi and she is a housewife. My sister's name is Kim Yeoung Eun and she's in first grade in high school, while I am 11 years old and I am in 4th grade in elementary school. My name is Kim Sue Eun.
They're four members in my family, my mother, my father, my sister and me. My father's name is Kim Sang Hyun and he is an officer. My mother's name is Kim Seon Mi and she is a housewife. My sister's name is Kim Yeoung Eun and she's in first grade in high school, while I am 11 years old and I am in 4th grade in elementary school. My name is Kim Sue Eun.