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작성자 : jiw***   ·   2016-03-03

I don't like cockroach the most. Because they transmit other places' germs also their reproductive is so great that we can't kill them easily. And then I hate their own feeler and jus its appearance makes me feel terrible.

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I don't like cockroach the most because they transmit germs. Also, they reproduce quickly so we can't kill them easily. I also hate their feelers and just its appearance makes me feel terrible.

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