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작성자 : chr*** · 2016-03-03
Plastic surgery can be harmful because it can be worse.
And if you do plastic surgery too much and your friends can't remember you.
And if you do plastic surgery too much and your friends can't remember you.
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Plastic surgery can be harmful for it can be worse. Moreover, too much
plastic surgery can make your friends unable to remember you.
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Your answer is brief but it is straight to the point.
Please study and learn how to write a paragraph.