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작성자 : hel***   ·   2016-03-01

left and right: I didnt know where my new class is so i went left and right.
For ages: For ages i watied for my friends to come.
Take off: I want to take off.














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CORRECTION/S:

1. I didn't know where my new class was  so I went left and right. (Please always capitalize the "I" in any occasion to refer to yourself. Be consistent with your verb tenses and use the symbol (') when you use an apostrophe.)

2. For ages, I waited for my friends to come. (Please check your spelling for the word "waited" and use a comma (,) after the word "ages."

3. CORRECT

FEEDBACK:

Your sentences are fairly good. Study how to use punctuation marks correctly and read more books to hone your writing skills. Thank you very much, Victoria!

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