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작성자 : doi*** · 2016-02-27
Alice best friend name is Cindy.
Alice and Cindy is very scare and exciting. because They goes to monster house.
They arrived the monster house. and enter monster house. Alice suprised.
The monster harm to Alice and Cindy.Alice and Cndy run away.
and they are laugh!!!
Alice and Cindy is very scare and exciting. because They goes to monster house.
They arrived the monster house. and enter monster house. Alice suprised.
The monster harm to Alice and Cindy.Alice and Cndy run away.
and they are laugh!!!
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Alice best friend's name is Cindy. Alice and Cindy is are very scared and exciting excited because they goes will go to the monster house. They arrived the monster house. and entered the monster house. Alice was suprised. The monster tried to harm to Alice and Cindy. Alice and Cndy They run ran away and they are laughed!!!
Hi Ruby! This is a fun story! Thank you for submitting your homework. ^_^ Did something like this happen to you in person, too? :) Anyway, I am happy that as young as you are, you are able to form a story and express it in an understandable way. I am very pleased.
Anyway, do take note of the following things and maybe we could discuss them little but little in class: word selection (scare should be scared; exciting should be excited), pronouns (You could use 'they' for Alice and Cindy), possession and punctuation.
Great job, Ruby! See you in class!
-Teacher Cherish
Anyway, do take note of the following things and maybe we could discuss them little but little in class: word selection (scare should be scared; exciting should be excited), pronouns (You could use 'they' for Alice and Cindy), possession and punctuation.
Great job, Ruby! See you in class!
-Teacher Cherish