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작성자 : liz***   ·   2016-02-29

I want to have a Hedgehog.
Because They are so cute.And They are small.
Hedgehog is Very smart and they Now How is His Owner.
They are Good and Nice to they'er Owner.
So I like Hedgehog

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CORRECTION/S:

I want to have a hedgehog as my pet because hedgehogs are so cute and small. Not only that, they are smart and can recognize?humans especially their owners. They're sweet and nice.

- Study how to use articles
- Know when and how to use punctuation marks especially period (.)
- Know how to begin a sentence (Avoid using "because" "and" at the beginning without any reason.)
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FEEDBACK:

I appreciate this homework but this is not actually what I asked you to submit. We're done discussing about animals and this one you submitted is the same you gave me before. Please be attentive and follow instructions next time. Nonetheless, I always appreciate you as my student. Thank you so much and see you.
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