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homework-my dream house

작성자 : hj0***   ·   2016-02-25

My dream house has two floors, 4 rooms and a yard.
2rooms is in the 1st floor,2rooms is in the 2nd floor.
4 fooms will be my bedroom, my dining room, reading room and 1 room is a play room. Dining room and play room is in the 1st floor.
My house will be clean. I will clean it everyday.
In the yard, there is my flower garden and my vegitable garden and some apple trees and grape trees, a dog and a pair of birds and a cat and three rabits and some carps.

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My dream house has two floors, 4 rooms and a yard. There first 2 rooms are on the 1st floor and the other 2 rooms are on the 2nd floor.
The rooms will be my bedroom, my dining room, reading room and 1 room is a play room. The dining room and the play room are on the 1st floor.
My house will be clean. I will clean it everyday. In the yard, there are my flower garden and my vegetable garden. Moreover, there are some apple trees, grape trees and crops. There are also animals such as a dog, a pair of birds, a cat and three rabbits


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