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작성자 : lee*** · 2016-02-23
Title:The different between the mordern painting and the old painting.
Long time ago, people collected colored rocks and useful things.
They crashed it and poured some water on it, then the paint was made.
It was the time that they invented the paints.
In the modern times, they don't use natural paints on the paintings but we use mechanical paints instead of natural paints.
Long time ago we made the paints really difficult but nowadays, making paints are really easy. That't the different between the mordern painting and the old painting.
Long time ago, people collected colored rocks and useful things.
They crashed it and poured some water on it, then the paint was made.
It was the time that they invented the paints.
In the modern times, they don't use natural paints on the paintings but we use mechanical paints instead of natural paints.
Long time ago we made the paints really difficult but nowadays, making paints are really easy. That't the different between the mordern painting and the old painting.
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Title:The different between the mordern painting and the old painting.
Long time ago, people collected colored rocks and useful things. They crashed it and poured some water on it, then the paint was made.
It was the time that they invented the paint.
In the modern times, they don't use natural paints on the paintings but we use chemical paint instead of natural ones.
Way back, making paint was really difficult but nowadays, making paint is really easy. That't the difference between the modern paintings and the old paintings.
Good job ! Thank you for doing your homework, Colin.
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