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작성자 : red*** · 2016-02-22
My teacher's name is Jains.
She is very kind and she always smiles.
If your teacher is Jains, you're very
lucky. When I study with her,
she explains everthing so I can understand.
Thank you for reading my diary^^
Have a good week^^~
She is very kind and she always smiles.
If your teacher is Jains, you're very
lucky. When I study with her,
she explains everthing so I can understand.
Thank you for reading my diary^^
Have a good week^^~
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CORRECTION/S:
She is very kind and she always smiles.
If your teacher is Jains, you're very lucky.
When I study with her, she explains everything so I can understand.
Thank you for reading my diary^^
Have a good week^^~
Thank you for reading my diary^^
Have a good week^^~
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* Possessive form
* Pronouns
* Sentence completion