-How would we feel to our familly and friend that they are important
I feel important when my mom cook for me. I feel important when my father play with me. I feel important when my brother is cute and lovely. I feel important when my friend visit my birthday party
CORRECTION/S:
-How would we feel to our family and friends that they are important?
I feel important when my mom's cook for me. I feel important when my father's plays with me. I feel good when my brother is acting cute and lovely. I feel important when my friends visit me at my birthday party.

POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
*Preposition
*Verb Tenses
*Word order

Comment:
Hi, Tate according to the homework that I given you is, you should point of view that how would we feel to family or friends that they are important.  But, its okay just try your best again next time. However, you did a great job! High five~!
-Teacher Michelle