Teacher Jains ! Could you please check my book report again? ;; ???¾?½


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?? It's not a Matilda; Book- The Magic Finger
by Roald Dahl
 
This book is about hunting. Yes, hunting is really bad to animals. But, there are people who love hunting. ?¾
There is a little girl who has the magic finger. ' What is the magic finger? If she uses her magic finger to someone, that human will change - like... duck or bird so on. 
She has friends named Philip and William. She sees them were hunting a rabbit. She really hates hunting animals. 
She cries to them. Even she doesn't know.. but she uses the magic finger to them !!!
The next morning , when Ms. Gregg wakes up, his arms are gone! And he just have wings.
And His family are also changed just like Ms. Gregg. ' 
They try to fly. At the same time, ducks live into there house. One duck is using Philip's gun, and other duck is playing William's train. And Two adult ducks are cooking some food. Yes. The magic finger does it. Ms. Gregg's family should build their  net by themselves. How about foods? They don't want to eat worms. But they should eat worms. ' Delicious ' 
Oh. .the next morning they are flying in the sky, and the ducks are coming. " There is your gun, Philip. Quack ! I will kill your child with your child's gun, Ms. Gregg. (You kill my children to..- I will kill your children, too or My children will be killed, too? )  " Ms. Gregg is very confused and really scared. They promise  to never hunt animals so they change. Know you'll know how this story's ends. Right ?
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Nice book report, Claire! ^^

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