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작성자 : liz*** · 2016-02-21
Because Harry Potter Is a fantasy and It's about Magic.
And I like fantasy and Magic.
2. I like percy jackson & the Olympians : The LIghtning thief.
because percy jacksen is so Brave so I want to emulate him.
3. I like The Hunchback of Notre-Dame.
Because I like Esmeralda. She is very beautiful.
4. I like Book of cinder boy.
Because I's very funny.
5. I like Jane Eyre.
Because Jane EYre is Very smart and she have a vest friend.
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Below is the list of my favorite books:
1. "Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows" - I like this book for I love fantasy and magical stories.
2. "Percy Jackson and the Olympians" - What makes me love this story so much is Percy Jackson's braveness. He is such a good hero that I feel like I want to emulate his character.
3. "Hunckback of Notre Dame" - This is also one of my favorite books. This taught me so many lessons and I love Esmeralda's pretty face.
4. "Book of Cinder Boy" - I like this because it's funny and I appreciate comedic stories.
5. "Jane Eyre" - This is one of the most inspiring books I have ever read. The main character, Jane Eyre, is sucha? good role model. She is pretty and smart.
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