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작성자 : chr*** · 2016-02-18
We have to smile every day.
And we must think positibley.
And we have to do some happy things.
And we must think positibley.
And we have to do some happy things.
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Tips on how to maintain a positive outlook in life:
1. Smile a lot. Laughter is the best medicine. (Your sentence is already correct. I just improved it a bit.)
2. We must think positively. / We have to be optimistic. (Please watch how you spell words.)
3. Enjoy and live life to the fullest. (Your sentence is okay but I guess this is how you really would like to say it.)
FEEDBACK:
I always appreciate it when you submit homework on time. I just hope that you will at least try your best to write a paragraph and not just a few sentences in points like you always do. This is all for you, Chris. Thank you!
:) :)