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작성자 : jiw***   ·   2016-02-16

I want Zica virus not to spread over the world. Because the virus is a cause of microcephaly. We can have handicapped children and can't give normal life to them because of it. When adult get this virus, they can recover themselves in just 7days. But when pregnant get this, they have disability before they were even born though they don't have any fault. The environment accelerate outbreak. Many forests which are destroyed by thoughtless logging are the best land for the mosquitos. So if we wanted to stop to spread Zica virus, we should stop to log and clean our environment.

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I want Zica virus not to spread over the world because the virus is a cause of microcephaly. There will be handicapped children and we can't give normal life to them because of it. When an adult gets this virus, they can recover from it in just 7 days. But when a pregnant woman gets this, her baby might have disabilities before he/she was even born though it's not her fault. The environment accelerates the outbreak. Many forests which are destroyed by illegal logging are the best land for the mosquitoes. So, if we wanted to stop to spread Zica virus, we should stop illegal logging and clean our environment.

Hi, Linda!

Thank you for always making an effort to o or submit your homework on time. I appreciate how you put your ideas into words. Have a great time out their, Linda! See you in our class.

-Teacher Joanna

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