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작성자 : lov*** · 2016-02-17
<The Sport That I Woud Like To Earn>
I want to earn dodge boll. Because i wan to make friend with ball and we play dodge ball in shool.
I want to earn dodge boll. Because i wan to make friend with ball and we play dodge ball in shool.
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<The Sport That I Would Like To Learn>
I want to learn dodge ball because I want to make new friends while playing dodge ball at school.
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