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작성자 : lcy*** · 2016-02-15
I don't like order pizza in my birthday party because i like chickin. and i don't like this very very. That is my birthday present is book and pencil,eraser.That is my present i feel bad.
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CORRECTION/s:
Holdiing a birthday party is truly fun and exciting. I like ordering pizzas in birthday parties. I never liked pizzas. If I were to choose a specialty, I would prefer chicken or something else. On the other hand, I dislike it when I receive a pencil, a book or an eraser for birthday presents.
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1. Please prolong your sentences to form a paragraph.
2. Check your punctuation.
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