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작성자 : mar*** · 2016-02-12
Story Title-Soccer competition.
"It's enormous!" our soccer coach said. "We can go to soccer competition!" he said. I said to him "How?We already lost!" we said. He told us that our rivals in preliminary heats lost too, so now we can compete them again and if we win, we can go to the final! Our team name is FC Zlatan, and we attended to soccer competition but our grade wasn't good. So we failed but our rival lost, so we have a chance to go to the final! At that game we won! We won by Penalty shoot-out. Score was 4-3! We went to the final and our team got bronze medal! Today was very wonderful day!
P.S. I think it isn't fun...
"It's enormous!" our soccer coach said. "We can go to soccer competition!" he said. I said to him "How?We already lost!" we said. He told us that our rivals in preliminary heats lost too, so now we can compete them again and if we win, we can go to the final! Our team name is FC Zlatan, and we attended to soccer competition but our grade wasn't good. So we failed but our rival lost, so we have a chance to go to the final! At that game we won! We won by Penalty shoot-out. Score was 4-3! We went to the final and our team got bronze medal! Today was very wonderful day!
P.S. I think it isn't fun...
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Story Title-Soccer competition.
"It's enormous!" our soccer coach said. "We can go to
Hi Mario! Thanks for submitting your homework. This is a good story, by the way. This is not a usual type of story so I find it very interesting. :)
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