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HomeWork Oliver

작성자 : ssd***   ·   2016-02-12

I went to the GrandMother's House.

and I did skiing.

But Play Snowball fight with my sister too.

I think that's all for my Homework.

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CORRECTION/S:

I went to my grandmother's house 
and I went skiing.
I also played snowball fight with my sister.
I think that's all for my homework.

POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:

* Capitalization
* Possessive pronouns
* Sentence fragments
* Verb tenses
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