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Ranting (Teacher Macy)
작성자 : vxz*** · 2016-02-04
Most of her nagging is about my life cycle. Because it is 10 O'clock that the time to attend the office, I sleep late and get up late than she. So she says to me go to bed early also get up early. To be honest, it bothers me. But, cause she has concerns to me, I appreciate nagging. I love my mom.
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STUDENT: My mom doesn't never skip ranting every day.
CORRECT: My mom doesn't never stop ranting every day.
EXPLANATION:
a. Let's talk about math! Adding two negative numbers will give us a positive result. The same thing goes with language. If we jam two negative words, we will get a positive result. Saying that your mother NEVER DOESN'T SKIP RANTING will give the meaning that your mother never rant. So, you see, I am not really that bad at math ^^
b. NEVER could be used as a time expression. Thus, EVERY DAY, which is another time expression, could already be omitted.
STUDENT: Most of her nagging is about my life cycle.
CORRECT: She mostly nags me about my lifestyle.
EXPLANATION:
a. NAGGING in this sentence is used as a verb. NAG can be used as a noun but the sentence should be rephrased a bit.
b. LIFE CYCLE involves the span of time from the moment a person was born up the time when he dies. LIFESTYLE, on the other hand, is how a person lives.
STUDENT: Because it is 10 O'clock that the time to attend the office, I sleep late and get up late than she.
CORRECT: Because I go to the office at 10 o'clock, I sleep late and get up more late than she does.
EXPLANATION:
a. The "O" from o'clock is never capitalized unless it is the first word of a sentence.
b. The auxiliary verbs DO and DOES are used to avoid repeating a verb or a verb phrase.
STUDENT: So she says to me go to bed early also get up early.
CORRECT: So she tells me to go to bed early so I could get up early.
EXPLANATION:
a. TELL means to inform someone. SAY, on the other hand, means to express something in words.
b. SO is used to voice out the result of an action.
STUDENT: To be honest, it bothers me.
CORRECT!
STUDENT: But, cause she has concerns to me, I appreciate nagging
CORRECT: But because she is concerned with me, I appreciate her nagging.
EXPLANATION:
a. CAUSE is basically used to state the reason for something. BECAUSE, on the other hand, is used to explain something.
b. WITH is also used like ABOUT.
c. If you did not put HER, it would seem like you like being nagged by every one.
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My mom never stop ranting. She mostly nags me about my lifestyle. Because I go to the office at 10 o'clock, I sleep late and gets up more late than she does. So she tells me to go to bed early so I could get up early. To be honest, it bothers me. But because she is concerned with me, I appreciate her nagging.
- Macy