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작성자 : lov***   ·   2016-02-04

<What Usually Disturbs You When You Are Studying?>
Mysister disturbs me.
She enters my room and tickle me or reads books aloud.

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CORRECTION/S:

My sister disturbs me.

She enters my room and tickles me or reads books aloud.

POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:

* Proper spacing
* Subject - Verb agreement
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