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Homework(List down some of useful accessories we wear during the winter.)
작성자 : man*** · 2016-02-03
Korea usualy wear accessories on winter.
It is jacket. It is very necessary things.
Beacuse winter is very cold. So if wear a thin clothes, we will frozen.
And we wear a gloves. It is necessary. Beacuse If don't wear a gloves, the hand is frozen. And we wear a scarf. I think scarf is not necessary but If we can feel more mildness. And last things is earplug. you told this today lesson.
But I thint earplug is not necessary.
It is jacket. It is very necessary things.
Beacuse winter is very cold. So if wear a thin clothes, we will frozen.
And we wear a gloves. It is necessary. Beacuse If don't wear a gloves, the hand is frozen. And we wear a scarf. I think scarf is not necessary but If we can feel more mildness. And last things is earplug. you told this today lesson.
But I thint earplug is not necessary.
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Koreans usually wear accessories in winter.
Winter jackets are necessary because of extreme cold weather. So, if we wear a thin clothes, we will freeze.
Also, we need to wear a gloves. It is necessary. If we don't wear a gloves, our hands will freeze. We need to wear a scarf too. I think scarf is not necessary, but it will also help to keep you warm. Lastly, you need to wear ear plugs. You mentioned this during our class today.
However, I think ear plugs are not necessary.
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