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작성자 : iam***   ·   2016-02-02

today i got up from my bed. next, i ate my breakfast. then, i went to my art academy. when i came home, i ate ramyeon for lunch. after eating, my math teacher came. when math teacher was gone, i solved some math problems. next, i prepared for my english lesson. after that, i ate dinner and solved some math problems. and i went to my math academy. then, i came home and i solved some math problems. and finally i slept.

답변

today I got up from my bed. nexti ate my breakfast. then, i went to my art academy. when i came home, i ate ramyeon for lunch. after eating, my math teacher came. when math teacher was gone, i solved some math problems. nexti prepared for my english lesson. after that, i ate dinner and solved some math problems. and i went to my math academy. then, i came home and i solved some math problems. and finally i slept.

Correction:

Today I got up from my bed. I ate my breakfast. Then, I went to my art academy. When I came home, I ate ramyeon for lunch. After eating, my Math teacher came. When she went homeI solved some Math problems. NextI prepared for my English lesson. I ate dinner and solved some math problems  againI went to my math academy. ThenI came home and finally  slept.


-- I can say that you had a busy day! =)
THANK YOU FOR DOING YOUR HOMEWORK!

-- Teacher Mela

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