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작성자 : abr***   ·   2016-01-30

I went to the 의정부 with my grandmother, grandfather and brother by subway.
I arrived at the restaurant about 1 o'clock.
Grandfather ordered sausage stew for three and noodle for two.
We ate sausage stew.
It was very delicious.
I want to go to the 의정부 one more.

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I went to the ????´¨?? with my grandmother, my grandfather and my brother by subway.
We arrived at the restaurant about 1 o'clock.
My grandfather ordered sausage stew for three and noodles for two.
We ate sausage stew.
It was very delicious.
I want to go back to ????´¨?? once more.


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Hi, Abraham!
Your sentences is becoming easier to understand. Please remember the proper way of writing a paragraph. You are doing a great job. See you next class!
-Teacher Joanna

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