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작성자 : qee***   ·   2016-01-29

which of the following would you like to rides on

swining pool-shuttle bus

l want to gyeonbookgung place.
By subway.

Bye bye
Alice

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CORRECTION/S:

Which of the following would you like to ride on?


Swimming pool/Shuttle bus

I went to gyeonbookgung palace by subway.

Bye bye 
Alice

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