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my daily journal
작성자 : iam*** · 2016-01-29
today i got up from my bed. and i solved math problems. next,i memorized some english words. then i read some books. after that i went to the hostipal. when i came home, i read some more books. and i prepared for my english class. next, i read some more and more books. then i rested litte bit. and i went to the math academy. when the academy was finished, i came home and i solved math problems. then, i slept.
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When I got up from my bed this morning, I solved some Math problems. Then, I memorized some English words. Also, I read some books. After that, I went to the hospital. When I came home, I read more books. Then, I prepared for my English class. I read more and more books after. Then, I rested a bit before going to the Math academy. When the class was finished, I went home and solved some Math problems before going to bed.
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