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Homework(Search for 2 giants creatures and compare their lenth and weight.)
작성자 : man*** · 2016-01-28
Predeter-x:This animal lenth is 15meter.And It weigh is 30t.
Shonisaurus : This animal lenth is 20meter. And It weigh is 40t.
The compare snetence,
Shonisaurus is longer than the Predter-x.
Shonisaurus is heavier than the Predter-x.
Shonisaurus : This animal lenth is 20meter. And It weigh is 40t.
The compare snetence,
Shonisaurus is longer than the Predter-x.
Shonisaurus is heavier than the Predter-x.
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CORRECTION/S:
Shonisaurus : This animal's length is 20 meters and it weighs 40 tons.
The comparative sentences:
The Shonisaurus is longer than the Predter-x.
The Shonisaurus is heavier than the Predter-x.
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